I really enjoyed looking at Ruby’s pieces and responses to each of the blogs. I love how each piece has used lots of colour. One thing i did pick up on was that she didn’t write anything to give a slight indicator of how she got to the response. I think you could have added a lot more images to show where the inspiration came from. Images would have supported and added to each blog response, it would allow the person viewing it to instantly see your thought processes.
For example week 2: Emerging Technologies In Fashion, i really like the piece you have made but because there’s no writing or supporting images personally I don’t see how a flower links to technology in the fashion world. I also think you’ve stuck to one technique when responding. You need to experiment more with different processes, materials and technique – Wajeeha Bilal Patel
I really enjoyed looking at Ruby’s pieces and responses to each of the blogs. I love how each piece has used lots of colour. One thing i did pick up on was that she didn’t write anything to give a slight indicator of how she got to the response. I think you could have added a lot more images to show where the inspiration came from. Images would have supported and added to each blog response, it would allow the person viewing it to instantly see your thought processes.
For example week 2: Emerging Technologies In Fashion, i really like the piece you have made but because there’s no writing or supporting images personally I don’t see how a flower links to technology in the fashion world. I also think you’ve stuck to one technique when responding. You need to experiment more with different processes, materials and technique – Wajeeha Bilal Patel